Monday 1st March

Not operating at full strength today, I submitted the 1st version of possible text for the Ren'Ai game and it seems there is still much to be done.

Generally a serious overhaul is required and I need to rethink my ideas as I fear I may have misinterpreted some of the details. Furthermore I need to actually create some solid names for the characters

In anycase here is the script from the first attempt.

Act 1 (Introduction to the Family)

Head Maid ???: Ahh, you must be the new maid assigned to work here right?, we have been expecting you…

Head Maid ???: Hurry and bring your things inside and I will show you where you will be staying.

Maid: Oh! Thank You.



Head Maid ???: Ok, now that you have had chance to settle in, it’s about time I took you around the house to show you where everything is as well as introduce you to the family. But before we leave I will ask that you to remain polite and silent unless spoken to at all times. I will answer all your questions upon our return here.

Hand Maid ???: So are you ready to depart?

Option 1 “Yes, I am ready”

Head Maid ???: Excellent, let’s go.

Option 2 “I don’t think I’m ready…”

Head Maid ???: “I’m sorry but time is of the essence, you wouldn’t want to be dismissed on your first day would you?”

















Act 2: Corridor

Maid and Head Maid are walking in the corridor after finishing the tour of the house.

Head Maid: And that concludes the tour of the house…

Maid: This house is beautiful, it’s so majestic…

Head Maid: Yes, and we aim to keep it that way, Lord and Lady Aeuhert worked hard to get to where they are today and this house is the fruit of their labours.

Head Maid: Anyway we must head to the main lounge, Lady Aeuhert will be there momentarily to meet you…



Head Maid: Good Afternoon, Master Sebastian.



Maid: Oh! Good Afternoon…

Sebastian: …



Head Maid: That was Master Sebastian, The first born into the Aeuhert family, he doesn’t say much but for his age he is incredibly smart.



Head Maid: Come along now, we mustn’t be late to the lounge.

Maid: Yes! Of course!










Act 3 The Lounge.

The two maids are waiting in the lounge when they are approached by a male servant.

Servant: So you must be the new maid, a pleasure to meet you my name is



Possible options choice here?

Maid: Oh no, the pleasure is all mine.



Head Maid: I do wish you would stop doing that , If you get caught you will be on additional duties for the next month.

Servant: I was only being civil by introducing myself, Nothing wrong with that is there?

Head Maid: You never change do you…

Servant: , Do I detect some jealousy in your tone ?

Head Maid: Don’t be ridiculous!

Servant: , Very well then you win, I will take my leave… We will speak properly at a later time…



Head Maid: If you know what’s good for you, you won’t ever do that again!

Maid: I’m Sorry…

Head Maid: I mean really what if Lady Talisa saw…



Lady Talisa: What if I saw what?

Head Maid: Ma’am you startled me, I was just explaining to our new maid here about what would happen if you saw dust on your favourite cabinet…

Lady Talisa: Is that so?



Head Maid: *whispers* Stand up and introduce yourself!

Maid: Oh!



Maid: My name is from this day I will be working you, please look after me!

Lady Talisa: …



Lady Talisa: (You may go back to your room and Rest or Rest today) you must be weary from traveling here so you will start your normal duties tomorrow morning…

Maid: Yes Ma’am, Thank you very much…

Lady Talisa: Dismissed.



Head Maid: Well I must resume my own duties now, so go back to your room for today.