Monday 9 November 2009

Monday 9th November

Characters Update:

Here is the electronic version of my character 2nd edits.

Adelia's Profile

Name: Adelia Aeuhert
Height: 5ft 3in
Age: 27
Bloodtype: AB+
Weapon Names: “Aurelio” & “Voletta” (Daggers)

Story:

The second born into the Auhert family, Adelia is very smart to for her age and has an IQ around 200 points.
From birth she has spoilt by her older brother Sebastian who would do anything to keep her appeased and as a result of this she has become very demanding of her brother.
In one of her demands Adelia stated she wanted to also be trained in a weapon style like her brother but unlike him she wanted a style that makes her look enchanting and elegant as well as being lethal, to which Sebastian agrees to train her in an art of her choosing.
Deep down beneath the spoilt girl exterior she respects Sebastian because of his loyalty to her and their mother unlike Alexander who in her eyes is nothing more than a “Betrayer” for going along with their father’s way of thinking and denouncing them entirely
After the two left she noticed her brother was talking more in private with their mother, catching on that something wasn’t right she again demanded that her brother take her with him to one of these chats, though reluctant Sebastian accepted that she should know the truth and that nothing should be hidden away from her.
After learning the truth from her mother Adelia spent her days continuing her training and ordering her brother about, however she did have a new found respect and appreciation for her mother and swore to herself she would be like her.
It wasn’t until her mother passed that she really began to change, Adelia struggled to come to terms with the loss and in fact blamed Alexander for their mothers death.
But through her sadness she realized her brother was now the head of the family and would soon become the new wielder of “Agnedynestra”.
Suddenly life wasn’t so bad she began to contemplate how she could now use her brother’s influence as a means to get others to do things for her while also still having leverage on her brother. The concept was something that appealed to Adelia very much just as much as some other things she had been thinking about…

If the will stated that both parents needed to be dead before the sword is passed on then…

He had to die.

Without her brother knowing she organized and orchestrated a remorseless but successful attack that left her father dead, so now with both parents out the picture the sword could pass on to its rightful owner.

When the day came for the will to be read by the family dignitaries, Adelia noticed that her brother Alexander was absent from the proceedings, she inquired as to his whereabouts to Sebastian, to which she learned he had been unable to attend for some undisclosed reason.

As the will was being read out the alarms to signify a security breach sounded, echoing throughout the estate.

The sword was being stolen!

Adelia met eyes with her brother and immediately they both came to the same conclusion…

“Alexander…”

No sword meant no control and no control meant no sword, growing more agitated by the second she ordered the security to stop him at costs, unfortunately for them however Alexander had escaped.

Now with the sword even further away from her reach Adelia joins her brother in the search for the sword and Alexander.

Sebastian's Profile

Name: Sebastian Aeuhert
Height: 6ft 9in
Age: 39
Bloodtype: AB+
Weapon Name: “Saberhagen” (One Handed Broadsword)

Story:

Born into a noble bloodline Sebastian is the first and eldest son thus he is the rightful heir to the Aeuhert family name. As a young boy Sebastian grew up with the finest of what life had to offer him, the family servants would tend to his every whim and call at his mother’s behest, much to the chagrin of Sebastian’s father the great warrior Raphael Aeuhert.
Raphael was adamant that spoiling the young Sebastian was reversing his teachings of discipline and work which Sebastian was learning through combat and that this in turn would lead to the boy being blinded and unable to accept the world as it truly is, instead forever living in a fantasy world where only wealth and splendor exists.
Over time Sebastian’s feelings for his father changed to feelings of anger and eventually resentment over what his father was doing to his mother who was pregnant with their daughter Adelia, to him and to the family. But silently he found comfort in the fact that one day he would surpass his father and would make his mother proud.

Years passed and Sebastian learned from his mother that he was a brother again to a baby boy named Alexander.
Growing up Alexander was notably closer to his father, which made Sebastian’s relationship with his brother troubled, however Sebastian dismissed it as the boy did not know any better and eventually he will be forced to grow up and learn the truth. However as a result of this he often found himself spoiling Adelia who was growing up and becoming quite demanding of her big brother.

As time continued conflict in the family became worse and eventually led to Raphael leaving the Aeuhert family estate with Alexander .

After his parent’s split Sebastian watched his mother fall into a downward spiral of depression.
Along with Adelia he frequently spoke with his mother about the split and she confided in the two regarding the truth of their father, themselves and the Aeuhert family, She also made Sebastian promise that no matter what happens he would take care of his sister Adelia.

Soon after Sebastian was alarmed to find his mother dead.

The pain of seeing her dead wrenched Sebastian’s heart it was just too much to accept and bear.
He eventually noticed Adelia standing in the doorway silent and stunned at the sight.

As he turned back to face his mother he noticed what appeared to be a note on the nearby table.
Carefully he opened it and began to read...
What it said shook Sebastian to the core, her death could have been avoided but ultimately the depression caused by his father and step-brother did this.
Everything else after that was a blur to Sebastian his mind was focused on the idea it could have been avoided.

With the note in hand and without a word he walked up to Adelia, handed her the note and proceeded back to his own quarters.

Now at the age of 39 Sebastian is the head of the Aeuhert family and is the epitome of law, order and justice, he has a deep set loathing of people who fail to uphold these basic principles and also resents anything or anyone that would dare tell him otherwise. As the eldest sibling his mother wrote in her note that the great sword “Agnedynestra” is to be passed onto him upon both her and Raphael’s passing.

Time passed and soon Sebastian received word that Raphael Aeuhert was also dead.

He wasn’t certain but he figured Adelia had something to do with his sudden demise, he noticed that since her mothers death she had been notably different, he didn’t care either way though because it was his fathers fault his mother was gone in the first place.

Inevitably the time came for the sword to be bestowed upon Sebastian, though he wasn’t particularly fond of Alexander he sent word to him via a courier that he is invited to attend the meeting with the dignitaries and claim his share of what his father left.
Word returned that Alexander wasn’t attending for an undisclosed reason so Sebastian thought nothing more of it.

As the will was being read out the alarms to signify a security breach sounded, echoing throughout the estate.

The sword was being stolen!

He immediately met eyes with Adelia who appeared to also know what was happening.

Suddenly the “undisclosed reason” Alexander had stated previously became clear and Sebastian was outraged he didn’t realize it sooner, with his sister sending security after Alexander Sebastian drew his sword and also went after his step-brother.

Unfortunately Alexander proved to be too quick for all of them as he had already escaped into the city…

Sebastian attempted to continue chase after him but he was promptly stopped by Adelia who insisted they needed to plan before they went after him.
Though reluctant Sebastian along with Adelia began to plan how to retrieve the sword and their brother by any means necessary.

Alexander's Profile

Name: Alexander “Alex” Aeuhert
Height: 6ft 2in
Age: 20
Bloodtype: O-
Weapon Name: Agnedynestra (2 Handed Greatsword)

Story

The youngest son of the great warrior Raphael Aeuhert, unlike his siblings Alexander grew up with his father and denounced the noble life of wealth and splendor in favor of training with his father since he didn’t want to ride the coat-tails of his father’s success instead opting to carve his own legacy and path.
This was noted by the other siblings who in turn had nothing really to do with him as a result since they were both closer to their mother.
It wasn’t until a fight between his parents occurred and his father ended up leaving that Alexander was forced to make a life changing decision, either stay with his siblings and mother or leave with his father. The decision was an easy one, Alexander knew that if he stayed he possibly would be pried upon and so he left with his father.
Over the next few years Alexander trained using his father’s style eventually becoming a formidable warrior like his father was.
However Raphael was unwell and with every passing the day life ebbed and flowed out of the once mighty warrior.
Sensing that the end was near Raphael called Alexander to tell him the truth about the sword and about the great task he had to undertake.

“My son, you will be the true wielder of Agnedynestra, the sword resonates with your soul unlike the others therefore you must steal it from them before it’s too late and it falls into the wrong hands”

Those words stuck with Alexander like a bad itch but he knew what needed to be done the question was when?

Unfortunately for Alexander that time came sooner than he anticipated, for his father was killed in a brutal attack days later.

Alexander was devastated to lose his father; he knew exactly who was responsible for the attack and why they had done it. The question was still when…

The opportunity arose when he was contacted by his siblings who sent word via a courier that his presence would be required at the meeting with the family dignitaries.
Realizing this was the perfect chance to take the sword with the others distracted Alexander began to plan what to do.

Soon he sent word back that he would not be attending for undisclosed reasons when really he was going return anyway and take the blade.

During the meeting Alexander returned home for the first time in years and while avoiding detection he successfully managed to sneak into the family vault.
Alexander soon stood before the sword, the one thing that would change everything forever.
Energy pulsed through Alexander as he grasped and held the hilt of the sword and drew it from its’ resting place, a gesture that quickly sounded the estates alarms.

With not another second to lose Alexander made a dash for the exit and soon realized he was being followed.
Alexander managed to shake the guards and escaped into the night to become the new custodian of the blade Agnedynestra. Now with the power that his father spoke in his possession all he needed to do was hold onto it even if it meant fighting his own family,
Something he knew was only a matter of time…

Lord Raphael's Profile

Name: Raphael Aeuhert
Height: 7ft 0in
Age: ??
Bloodtype: ??
Weapon Name: Formerly Agnedynestra

Story

Once a noble hero and champion, Raphael Aeuhert was the driving force behind many great battles and wars, his aptitude is battle was unparalleled and the love of his family even more than that, whenever he left for battle he always made the promise to his family to return home safely no matter what trials awaited him wherever he was needed.
Time had passed since those days and now Raphael found himself to be dying of a slow de-generative disease.
Death did not phase or scare Raphael, he knew that in battle there was always a chance that he wouldn’t make it back alive but he did find comfort that his legacy would live on…

In the years before his illness Raphael was known to all as a hero, he had a wife and a son that loved him and he had a daughter on the way.

So where did it all go wrong?

The wealthy, majestic lifestyle seemed to turn his once loving wife into a corrupt, power-mad woman, this change did not go unnoticed by Raphael but it wasn’t until his son Sebastian was becoming spoilt that he felt it was time to intervene.

For years arguments continued to erupt about the boy and soon his sister to the point Raphael deemed it for the best if he were to leave them awhile.

During that time Raphael found himself in the company of another woman who didn’t seem too phased by his wealth or standing, instead she just loved him.
Time continued to pass and Raphael soon found himself with yet another son called Alexander.

Raphael loved his son but he was saddened he had allowed himself to cheat on his family but that wasn’t Alex’s fault so he would just have to face the consequences for his actions. In due course he returned to his family to introduce them to Alexander a move that started off seemingly well considering what happened.

But the cracks soon starting showing again as old ways returned and now with Sebastian and Adelia appearing to be controlled by his mothers influence, it was time for Raphael to leave again, this time for good.

Now on the brink of death Raphael continues to support Alexander anyway he can.

Lady Talisa's Profile



Name: Lady Talisa Aeuhert (Deceased)
Height: ??
Age: ??
Bloodtype: ??
Weapon Name: N/A

Story

Lady Talisa is the wife of the champion Raphael Aeuhert, she enjoys the wealth and fame of being the champion’s wife, regrettably this lifestyle soon got Talisa she turned from a once loving wife into a corrupt baroness driven by wealth and power.
She didn’t display this side to her son Sebastian however, instead choosing to lavish him with whatever he wished.
This did not sit well with Raphael who was strongly against spoiling the boy and the two would often argue about the matter.
Years later after the birth of the couples second child Adelia, Lady Talisa’s lust for power became too much for Raphael to bear any longer which prompted his swift departure from the family.
The premise of losing everything was something that lingered in Talisa’s mind and she was not about to let that happen, the mix of anger, sadness and corruption coursed through her arguably rendering her insane.
She quietly schemed to use her own children as instruments of revenge against Raphael.
Over the years her venomous words seeped into the minds of her two children, by playing the role of a victim crushed by husband she was able to manipulate them, causing them to harbour deep resentment towards their father while somewhat pledging undeniable loyalty to her.
Everything seemed to fall in place quite nicely until the fateful day when Raphael would return back to them with his new son Alexander…
Seeing this as another opportunity to turn another mind against Raphael she welcomed them.
Again on the exterior she posed as the nicer parent and tried exactly what she did before all while surpressing her seething rage for the boy.
This time however it was not working.the boy was having none of it, this further enraged Talisa who in turn told Adelia and Sebastian of the boys ungratefulness and cold demeanour towards her which as she anticipated led up to them also becoming cold towards Alexander just like they were their father.
Raphael was fully aware of what was going on and promptly took up the case with Talisa.
She begged and cried for him not to leave her again but really this again was a façade, as really this was exactly what she wanted more hate, more resentment it would ultimately seal his fate in due course.
Raphael promptly left with Alexander soon after and now she was able to fully turn Adelia and Sebastian against Alexander as well.
All she needed now was a catalyst to make their anger reach a fever pitch…
In a final act of maliciousness she would take her life and pass it off as an unbearable depression caused by the two…
With the children harbouring such hate as well as having her death to accept she believed it would awaken them for the better.
After waiting a while for the estate to settle down for the night, Talisa locked herself in her quarters and forged her suicide note that was later to be found by the children, in it she wrote her reasons why she killed herself, the rightful entitlement to the family name and the sword as well as her last request which was for them to stick together no matter what.
After rolling up the cursed missive and placing it somewhere easily noticeable she took a small knife out of her dress and slashed her wrist.
With all the pieces seemingly in place she managed a final defiant, sickening and malicious chuckle at the possible results of the resulting chaos.

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